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My family wanted to go on a road trip for vacation but we did not not where to go. We all talked about
what place we all would've liked to go and we decided to go to Denver Colorado. We had everything
planned for the trip after getting from school we would pack and wait on my dad to return from work
and we would head out meanwhile we waited for my dad my little brother Pedro was riding his bike
to pass the time, he wanted to do a trick but failed and fell of his bike. Pedro had ran to where i was at
and told me he broke his arm but i didn't believe him so i told him to tell my mom and she took him to
the hospital. My mom had told me to stay at home and wait for my dad and tell him what had happened.
When my dad had came home i told him what happened to Pedro he told me that we were going to wait
home and mom was going to take care of things. When my mom came home after 9 hours she told my
dad that Pedro had broken his funny bone at that time it was 2:09 am we were all tired and instead of
heading out the road we all went to bed.
what place we all would've liked to go and we decided to go to Denver Colorado. We had everything
planned for the trip after getting from school we would pack and wait on my dad to return from work
and we would head out meanwhile we waited for my dad my little brother Pedro was riding his bike
to pass the time, he wanted to do a trick but failed and fell of his bike. Pedro had ran to where i was at
and told me he broke his arm but i didn't believe him so i told him to tell my mom and she took him to
the hospital. My mom had told me to stay at home and wait for my dad and tell him what had happened.
When my dad had came home i told him what happened to Pedro he told me that we were going to wait
home and mom was going to take care of things. When my mom came home after 9 hours she told my
dad that Pedro had broken his funny bone at that time it was 2:09 am we were all tired and instead of
heading out the road we all went to bed.
The next day we went out in the morning to get breakfast from dairy queen after that we went to
Colorado. My mom was driving in the day time and my dad would drive in the night time we got to
Denver Colorado the next morning when we got there we were lost in the city because we did not know
where my brother Miguel lived so we had to call him his for his address when we called we sent a
message of his address. When we got to my brothers house we had to dress up and get ready for a
wedding practice it was my brothers wedding.
Colorado. My mom was driving in the day time and my dad would drive in the night time we got to
Denver Colorado the next morning when we got there we were lost in the city because we did not know
where my brother Miguel lived so we had to call him his for his address when we called we sent a
message of his address. When we got to my brothers house we had to dress up and get ready for a
wedding practice it was my brothers wedding.
The day of the wedding my brother Pedro was walking around with his funny bone broken and
he accidentally slipped and fell on his broken funny bone when he fell all the people that were in
the room heard a pop sound come from my brother Pedro when he fell and so my big brother
Miguel had to take Pedro to the nearest hospital and they waited at the hospital for 4 hours. The
doctor that seen Pedro had told him that he had his arm dislocated. my big brother Miguel almost
was late to his own wedding, he made it barely on time with my brother Pedro. My brother Miguel
got married and went on his honeymoon.
he accidentally slipped and fell on his broken funny bone when he fell all the people that were in
the room heard a pop sound come from my brother Pedro when he fell and so my big brother
Miguel had to take Pedro to the nearest hospital and they waited at the hospital for 4 hours. The
doctor that seen Pedro had told him that he had his arm dislocated. my big brother Miguel almost
was late to his own wedding, he made it barely on time with my brother Pedro. My brother Miguel
got married and went on his honeymoon.
it was funny but the only problem is there was a lot of contradicting and a lot of grammar mistakes. how was the wedding. did you do anything else in Colorado.
ReplyDeletey do they call it a funny bone cause when u hit it it's anything but funny
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