Chapter One
It was a rainy night a couple with a kid was coming back from vacation. They were driving down an empty highway. they've been driving for hours. They just want to get home. Out of nowhere bang. they swerve and they find a spot to pull over and change the tire and out of nowhere they was a loud bang and the father looks over and sees the lady laying by the side of the car because of the black truck and he rushed to his wife's aid. the black truck pulls over and this little old man gets out and get hysterical and runs over screaming that hes sorry and says he has no signal because of the storm they rush to the nearest place a cabin rental trying to see if they have a phone. The fat lady behind the counter and said hones are down until it stops raining. they ran back to the car and got in the truck and started driving to the nearest hospital they drove for about half in hour and had to stop because the bridge to town is out. they turned around a drove back to the cabin rental and asked if they had any cabins available and the lady said yea and gave them both keys they put the wife on the bed in till they could get help. the son looked out the window and said hey someone is pulling in the father went to the window and looked and saw three people get out of the car and went to the office about ten minutes later they came out a went in to a cabin.
Later, the father went to go get his son and the old man something to drink and eat from the vending machine and the three people was at the vending machine and there were two males and a woman. they asked if he knew when the bridge was going to be open he said he didn't know and that he hopes in the morning because of his wife. They started talking and they went back to the fathers cabin and he introduced his son and the old man
He said "my name is rick, this is my son Matt and that's frank." has he pointed towards the old man.
The man said his name was Ron. He said, " that's my fiancee Vanessa and her brother Alex
they all started talking Vanessa asked what happened to the woman in the bed and Rick said thats my wife and she was hit by a truck. they sat for a few hours talking Rick finally said i'm going to the office and seeing if they know when the road is going to open they all said they wanted to go and get out of the cabin so they went to the office and asked the lady if she knew when the road will be open she said it should be open after the storm. they went to leave and a car pulled in it was a small town cop and they asked if they could get them help for his wife he said he couldn't get to town because of the bridge, but hell check her make sure she doesn't need anything they went back to the room and when they opened the door they found her dead in the bed. Rick flipped out and started cussing Frank out and all Frank could was repeat that he was sorry. the cop calmed the situation down and said that he'll figure out what to do. he went to his car and called his station but he couldn't connect with them. he went back to the cabin and said he couldn't get a hold of any help because of the storm they went back to the office to asked the lady for another room for the cop and she wasn't there. the cop looked around couldn't find anyone,but he found the master key and said he would see if he could find anything useful or anyone and he went searching. they went back to the room and cant find the old man. the cop came back an hour later said he couldn't find the office manager and no one else around. they asked if he seen the old man he said no. the cop said no one leaves in till those people show back up. they said we cant stay here somethings going on it doesn't feel right and the cop said I will go out and look again just everybody stay here I will be back in one hour. they cop left and started searching again and the others said we cant stay here we need to leave but has there getting ready to leave they here a car. they looked out the window and saw a woman get out of a car and walk to the office about two minutes later see came out looking around the cop walked up to her and started talking to her. they started walking towards the room. They came in and she said hi I am Sarah and I don't know where i am i was trying to make it to a town and found that broken bridge and i remembered seeing a cabin rental place but know one is in the office. We know she disappeared a little bit ago. we were about to leave when you showed up. The little boy went to his dad and said he wasn't feeling good his dad said why don't you go lay down while we figure out what were going to do. they all went outside and started talking about what they were going to do they heard a scream coming from the office the father and they all ran to the office and looked around that the sound came from there but there wasn't anyone there. they went back to in front of the room and noticed that Alex was gone and looked inside saw Matt and asked where did Alex go and they said Vanessa stay with Matt and the others will look around they started looking around and the cop opened a door and found the office manager dead her throat was slit he went back to the room and met up with everyone and they said they couldn't find Alex. the cop said he found the office manager she was killed and they all freaked out and the two woman said we need to get out of here and they could take the boy and one other and they would come back and the others could take the other cars. the cop said we dont know who to trust and we would have to think if they could trust each other to do it and they all looked at each other and Rick told everyone to shut up the two woman will take Matt and leave. the cop said take my car. they went to the cop car it wouldn't start so they ran to the couples car and it started. Bang the car exploded. the others ran to the car to see it engulfed in flames. Rick started crying for his son but the cop got him calmed and the went back to the room trying to figure out whats going on they looked at the bed and the mothers body was gone they started to look for the other dead bodies they were all gone they heard a scream from from the the old man and they ran to see him dead outside the cabin door they started looking at each other and noticed that it couldn't of been either one of them because they were together, so they went back to the room and the cop locked Rick into the bathroom and told him he'll be back. he has to see if his radio works and he left. Rick finally after awhile he finally got free of the bathroom and went outside to see no cop car. there was nothing left but his car and it stopped raining so he went to his car and seen if it started it did. he was being really careful and pulled away. he made it to the road. he drove the bridge was up it seemed like it never happened. he went back to his house and packed and moved to start a new life but one day at his new place he was outside working on the yard and he turned around and saw this little boy he asked what his name was and what he was doing the boy smiled and said my names Matt and he pulled out hedge shears and killed Rick.
There was two cops that were transporting a serial killer and the killers name was Matt he had a hidden shank and stabbed the driver through his seat and the car wrecked and killed the other cop he got out and started running.
Later, the father went to go get his son and the old man something to drink and eat from the vending machine and the three people was at the vending machine and there were two males and a woman. they asked if he knew when the bridge was going to be open he said he didn't know and that he hopes in the morning because of his wife. They started talking and they went back to the fathers cabin and he introduced his son and the old man
He said "my name is rick, this is my son Matt and that's frank." has he pointed towards the old man.
The man said his name was Ron. He said, " that's my fiancee Vanessa and her brother Alex
they all started talking Vanessa asked what happened to the woman in the bed and Rick said thats my wife and she was hit by a truck. they sat for a few hours talking Rick finally said i'm going to the office and seeing if they know when the road is going to open they all said they wanted to go and get out of the cabin so they went to the office and asked the lady if she knew when the road will be open she said it should be open after the storm. they went to leave and a car pulled in it was a small town cop and they asked if they could get them help for his wife he said he couldn't get to town because of the bridge, but hell check her make sure she doesn't need anything they went back to the room and when they opened the door they found her dead in the bed. Rick flipped out and started cussing Frank out and all Frank could was repeat that he was sorry. the cop calmed the situation down and said that he'll figure out what to do. he went to his car and called his station but he couldn't connect with them. he went back to the cabin and said he couldn't get a hold of any help because of the storm they went back to the office to asked the lady for another room for the cop and she wasn't there. the cop looked around couldn't find anyone,but he found the master key and said he would see if he could find anything useful or anyone and he went searching. they went back to the room and cant find the old man. the cop came back an hour later said he couldn't find the office manager and no one else around. they asked if he seen the old man he said no. the cop said no one leaves in till those people show back up. they said we cant stay here somethings going on it doesn't feel right and the cop said I will go out and look again just everybody stay here I will be back in one hour. they cop left and started searching again and the others said we cant stay here we need to leave but has there getting ready to leave they here a car. they looked out the window and saw a woman get out of a car and walk to the office about two minutes later see came out looking around the cop walked up to her and started talking to her. they started walking towards the room. They came in and she said hi I am Sarah and I don't know where i am i was trying to make it to a town and found that broken bridge and i remembered seeing a cabin rental place but know one is in the office. We know she disappeared a little bit ago. we were about to leave when you showed up. The little boy went to his dad and said he wasn't feeling good his dad said why don't you go lay down while we figure out what were going to do. they all went outside and started talking about what they were going to do they heard a scream coming from the office the father and they all ran to the office and looked around that the sound came from there but there wasn't anyone there. they went back to in front of the room and noticed that Alex was gone and looked inside saw Matt and asked where did Alex go and they said Vanessa stay with Matt and the others will look around they started looking around and the cop opened a door and found the office manager dead her throat was slit he went back to the room and met up with everyone and they said they couldn't find Alex. the cop said he found the office manager she was killed and they all freaked out and the two woman said we need to get out of here and they could take the boy and one other and they would come back and the others could take the other cars. the cop said we dont know who to trust and we would have to think if they could trust each other to do it and they all looked at each other and Rick told everyone to shut up the two woman will take Matt and leave. the cop said take my car. they went to the cop car it wouldn't start so they ran to the couples car and it started. Bang the car exploded. the others ran to the car to see it engulfed in flames. Rick started crying for his son but the cop got him calmed and the went back to the room trying to figure out whats going on they looked at the bed and the mothers body was gone they started to look for the other dead bodies they were all gone they heard a scream from from the the old man and they ran to see him dead outside the cabin door they started looking at each other and noticed that it couldn't of been either one of them because they were together, so they went back to the room and the cop locked Rick into the bathroom and told him he'll be back. he has to see if his radio works and he left. Rick finally after awhile he finally got free of the bathroom and went outside to see no cop car. there was nothing left but his car and it stopped raining so he went to his car and seen if it started it did. he was being really careful and pulled away. he made it to the road. he drove the bridge was up it seemed like it never happened. he went back to his house and packed and moved to start a new life but one day at his new place he was outside working on the yard and he turned around and saw this little boy he asked what his name was and what he was doing the boy smiled and said my names Matt and he pulled out hedge shears and killed Rick.
There was two cops that were transporting a serial killer and the killers name was Matt he had a hidden shank and stabbed the driver through his seat and the car wrecked and killed the other cop he got out and started running.
THE END
It was hard to follow along because of all the run on sentences. I think it would be a lot better with more punctuation. The plot line was very interesting though.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good murder story. I really think that you should become a murder/ mystery writer.
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